In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your oppinion by using specific reasons and details
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In Japan, it is prohibited that students have a job in a law until they are junior high school students. As an exception, they can work to help their parents a bit. However, many high school students have a part time job, although they are still teenagers. This system makes sense for me. Therefore, I agree with the idea that teenagers who are still students have a job if they are high school students. I would like to show three of the reasons in writing.
First, teenagers should experience society. Schools are isolated places from society. Students know only the specific small world. In other words, schools do not teach what society is. They are not perfect in this meaning. I strongly believe that students should know the world that is completely separated from schools. If they are high school students, they are oldenough to know society. Of course, it does not have only a pure face. They will know a very dirty face. The experiences will be important as their education.
Second, teenagers should know the value of money. They will get money as long as they work. They will know the importance of money. It is difficult to earn 10,000 yen when they work in a part time job. If they get money from their parents, they will not understand the value of the money. They will waste that. To avoid that, they should earn money by themselves.
Third, teenagers should encounter a variety of people by working. Working in an office or shop, students will encounter many people. It is valuable for students. In schools, students see the same people everyday. They only see their friends and teachers. I believe that they should know various generations of people. Society consists of these people. Therefore, they will broaden their thinking by getting influence from these people.
To sum up, I declare that it is good for teenagers to have jobs as long as they are high schoolstudents. When I was a high school student, working was prohibited by the school. I wouldhave worked if working had not being banned.
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Tuesday, 5 October 2010
ExampleS-IELTS Writing Task 2 -- A Good Co-worker
We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion,what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important
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It is efficient to work with co-workers. We can cooperate to successfully accomplish a job.
However, not all co-workers are good partners. There are characteristics to be a good
colleague. Of them, three of the characteristics are described in the following paragraphs.
First, good co-workers are cooperative. We tackle the same work together. Thus, we have tocheer ourselves. For example, if one of the members mistakes, the others should encouragehim or her. They make up for the mistake together. We get to trust each other by this event.Therefore, we can do our best by cooperating at any time.
Second, good co-workers are smart. When smart workers work together, the work goes on
well. It is strong for business if people gather together to make an elite group. Nowadays,
business is very combative. We have to win the game to any other groups. Otherwise, we will
lose in the society. People want to work with smart co-workers to succeed. The group will
give benefits to any members of the group.
Third, good co-workers are ardent to any job. It is fundamental, but is very significant. When
people work with somebody, they have to work enthusiastically. This behavior stimulates
other people. Unenthusiastic people look lazy. They look to work as they want if they are not.
That is because other people of the group do not feel good to work with them. A project
should tackle cheerfully. If they do not work enthusiastically, the ambience of the group will
changes very badly. To work with unenthusiastic people is a disadvantage for the group.
Overall, characteristics of co-workers are important. To encounter the best co-workers is rare.
However, the characteristics above are at least sought by our society. These conditions are
manners to work with other people.
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It is efficient to work with co-workers. We can cooperate to successfully accomplish a job.
However, not all co-workers are good partners. There are characteristics to be a good
colleague. Of them, three of the characteristics are described in the following paragraphs.
First, good co-workers are cooperative. We tackle the same work together. Thus, we have tocheer ourselves. For example, if one of the members mistakes, the others should encouragehim or her. They make up for the mistake together. We get to trust each other by this event.Therefore, we can do our best by cooperating at any time.
Second, good co-workers are smart. When smart workers work together, the work goes on
well. It is strong for business if people gather together to make an elite group. Nowadays,
business is very combative. We have to win the game to any other groups. Otherwise, we will
lose in the society. People want to work with smart co-workers to succeed. The group will
give benefits to any members of the group.
Third, good co-workers are ardent to any job. It is fundamental, but is very significant. When
people work with somebody, they have to work enthusiastically. This behavior stimulates
other people. Unenthusiastic people look lazy. They look to work as they want if they are not.
That is because other people of the group do not feel good to work with them. A project
should tackle cheerfully. If they do not work enthusiastically, the ambience of the group will
changes very badly. To work with unenthusiastic people is a disadvantage for the group.
Overall, characteristics of co-workers are important. To encounter the best co-workers is rare.
However, the characteristics above are at least sought by our society. These conditions are
manners to work with other people.
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